Dream Deep

Not the most brilliantly worded poem, I've read, but it's a nice message, I understand what you're saying. I can tell, reading this, that you've been away from writing poetry ...

I think Tolkein does a lot for your poetry, Bjorn. ^_~ You have a very definite voice and style, which is quite involving. Sohini: pistols at dawn for number-one-fan-dom. :wink:

At the moment, I think it counts as my favorite, though admittedly my favorite changes rather often. ^_~ I liked when Svidrigailov (sp?) killed himself. And when he had Dounia ...

The concept was very good, very sweet and well thought out. But the wording and the formatting in places was more than a little confusing and made you lose your ...

Oh, this I love, Imp. This truly is wonderful. You have a very distince voice when you write and it moves right along. ^_~ I count flippancy or it's variations ...

Muahahahaha, I've already read it. ^_^ The YWS chat is a wonderful thing. So I shall merely re-iderate what I said in there: Ahem. Awesome. I think it's great, especially ...

Ooh... I liked that. I liked that a lot. :razz: I was trying to pick a favorite stanza the whole way through, but I like them all too much. It ...

Ack! Emoticons! *shoots emoticons* Never ever ever ever ever end a story with emoticons! o.O Okay, I'll stop there, but really. Don't do that. It borders on the cheesy. XD ...

Bjorn, This belongs in your blog, not on the poetry forum. You have produced and are capable of producing much better. Best, Brad What folly, I say. :wink: I think ...

Ahhh... good for your first shot. ^_^ Some suggestions, though, if I may: Shining brightly near a drabby old shack, or what some people would call it- "The ruins of ...

A really sweet, really nice poem, Yoha. ^_^ I wrote a poem once like this called "Wherever You Left For" that was the same general premise and much, much longer. ...

Er... I find this just a tiny bit pointless. A good blog entry, perhaps, but just a little pointless for poetry. A very good personal exercise for overcoming your block ...

Ahem. :wink: To quote something a friend wrote to me once: Darling, you're a genious. What the heck are you still doing on this website? Why aren't there books out ...

Very beautiful, Jack, very nice imagery. ^_^ Just one thing perhaps: leaves may fall the same time every year, petals droop and die, snow drifts and falls, day concedes to ...

Bad? Bad ? What folly, I say! This I've gotta crit. Prepare yourself for the deluge! (Lol, but you've gotta give me a few days.) :wink: